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KAREN  BROOKMAN's avatar

Yes, interested to see what happens next and particularly with the unremarkable lady, definitely something I feel will unravel maybe further along? I also laughed a bit as when you described how Ryan was told not to stare at people. So many train rides where everyone averts the others glares. I love to people watch and tell myself not to stare if I see someone who looks a little different - in my head because I love the way people stand out, but feel they will think something else.

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Mark Tonks's avatar

Hi Robert,

Yes interested to read more, chapter one has set up the beginning well, so looking forward to readying more about the characters.

I think $2 a month for 3 months is fair, as you mentioned in a reply earlier.

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