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KAREN  BROOKMAN's avatar

Agree with what Grayling said, some typos, Kieth and Shiela and 'tuning' the lights on. I know, forgive me, I was once teaching. Left that as I don't agree with the level of conformity amongst other things. Anyway, once again a good read, another layer of intrigue, why is the bank so secretive, why did she leave him that money, just for him. Feels like you are laying the foundations of certain characters, peeling away the layers bit by bit until all will be revealed. I did say once a week would be fine now I can't wait for the next one!

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Ian Thompson's avatar

Oh, I didn't mind Kieth - you could just make him Eastern European and swap the 'i' for a 'y'... or else he could be the Ford Prefect of the book, coming from another place, picking a normal sounding British name to be inconspicuous and just getting it ever so slightly wrong.

Onward!

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